Blunt Reviews

Their Angel

Creativity: 15/15

the way that story is. It's very interesting and has a very creative side to it.

Originality: 15/15

I definitely think the story is unique in the way that it does characters in the storyline. It is something that I have not read when it comes to fan fiction and things like that.

Storytelling: 5/15

I'm going to be honest: it's very dry when it comes to how the author is doing the story it's. Dry, it's like more conversation than anything else, and it gets boring when you're reading it. There's nothing enticing, nothing interesting, nothing that screams you want to continue to read it. Me after the first chapter, I was ready to stop. I was bored. There is nothing that begged me to continue to read it. But I did, and this is not to be mean or to say that you shouldn't continue writing. I would never say that, but I feel the conversations are very bland, and there's too much of them.

Character: 15/15

I find the characters to be very interesting and unique in their own way

Story Flows: 5/15

Needs to be edited with a thin-picked comb. It is really bad and has so many mistakes in it that some parts are hard to read.

Final Thoughts: 10/10

So, the stories do have their flaws. There is a lot going on with this story. It's not my cup of tea. There's a thing that the story would not be good for other people, like, you know, fan fiction and everything. I'm another big fan of fanfiction, and this story was just very dry and wasn't something I would continue to read. And I read a lot of stories, but for me, I have no interest in even continuing this story. There's so much that needs to be edited as well as needs to be rethought and rewritten. Again, this is not to be mean. This is just my honest opinion.

Chapters I read: prolog in three chapters

Total points:  65

Summary of the book: 

A story of a young girl who is too innocent for this cruel world. Her mother is the only person she trust. She is too pure. Her mother tried her best to protect her from every evil thing. And she succeeded till now. But....... What will happen when her mother marry a man and they went to live with him? Not knowing, they are practically going to live with Devil's.Started- 6 June, 2023 #1 in Angel This is my own story. I don't give any one any rights to copy or translate it.

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