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Creativity:15 /15 The story is very unique. I like how it's at a slow pace with the story's creativity. It's not a very fast-paced story, and sometimes, having a slow-paced story, your readers can appreciate it. I know I did.
Originality: 15/15 I love how it goes into the teacher aspect of the day. The teacher is a professor, so their classes come out later. I was confused because they said that they kissed another teacher and hugged them. I'm not sure if it's like a romantic relationship or if that's their way. Overall, the story was slow, but is an excellent original story.
Storytelling:15 /15 I like the storytelling it brings you in. It's almost like a home-feeling story. I love the characters. I love the story. It's very much a story you would read before bed or a story you would read when you want something, just more of a home-filled story than a dramatic one.
Character:10 /15 The characters were confusing initially because I don't remember hearing that they were male or female. So, in my mind, the way that the author represents the story, it seems like they are female, but then when you get home, and you realize that it's a male, it's a better aspect of it, but the way that they talked and everything I thought it was from like a female point of view. But it was still a good story. It just confused me.
Story Flows: 15/15 I did not see anything wrong with the story; I didn't see anything out of place. The sentence structure was excellent. Everything seemed to sound nice, and nothing seemed out of place. The story, in the end, flowed really well.
Cover Design:15 /15 I absolutely love the cover; that's all I can say.
Final Thoughts:10 /10 I like the story as a whole, and I would recommend the story to my readers. I'm not sure if I would continue it for my preference. Just because I'm very picky with stories and I have a lot of stories that I like, I'm already reading. But I would recommend this story to my readers and people who need an excellent, slow-paced story. It is a very unique story, and it's a perfect story, and once again, I don't understand why stories like this one and others I've read in the past. They are not being recognized or don't have the votes in the comments that they should have because these stories are the stories I live for.
Chapters I read:3
Total points: 95
Summary of the book:
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