Blunt Reviews

A Kingdom Of Dreams

Creativity:15 /15
I enjoyed this story because of how the author did the characters; their story reminded me of Sleeping Beauty. She doesn't know who her parents are, but other people raised her. It gave her Sleeping Beauty vibes. But it was still a very unique story.

Originality: 15/15
Even though it gave me Sleeping Beauty vibes, it was still different than what I've read in the past. I like how the author did the story because it's not a story you would think of or dig into. Because you would think it was about a princess or something. But when you open the book and start reading it, you are amazed and astonished at what this character's gone through to survive.

Storytelling:15 /15
I felt inside the story, watching everything unfold regarding the main character. I felt everything that she felt. I understood why she didn't trust me and why she thought that she was always lied to. This felt like old-fashioned storytelling to me. The way the author wrote it or is writing it feels like back in the old days. And to me, it's still excellent.

Character:15 /15
The characters made me laugh because they're so relatable. Even though they had just met, they bickered back and forth like a married couple. She doesn't trust him, but he has what she wants, which is food, so she's willing to period do what she needs to do to survive, but she knows in the end, whatever he's trying to show her is a lie as she believes in her Heart that nothing's going to change. These characters are so relatable to everyday people on top of their personalities, which is very impressive.

Story Flows: 15/15
I did not see anything wrong, but the story had no grammar errors, and the sentence structure was sound. Everything flowed. Nothing was out of place when nothing didn't sound out of place. So, for me, it went very smoothly when reading.

Cover Design:15 /15
The cover fit when it came to the story in the cover. They both were beautiful. The story is lovely. I did read all three chapters. And the body represents the story very well.

Final Thoughts:10 /10
The story was beautifully written. The author did a fantastic job when writing this story, and you can tell they put a lot of thought into it. For me, the story shines, and it's just the beginning; I have only read three chapters. But in those three chapters, you got so much Heart, sorrow, and willingness to survive. You can't help but love stories like this. This author needs to be no more because this is such a story gem.

Chapters I read:3

Total points:  100

Summary of the book:

"After the great war, King Archeron, who was not yet a king, was the obvious choice to be the monarch of Avenlea. He possessed all the qualities a king should have-courage, intelligence, boldness, strength, and empathy-but most of all, the Gods had given him a quality of his own, something he could pass on to his children. They gave him fire. Fire that could bring down nations."Jasmine has been told stories of Avenlea since she was a child, but it isn't until she meets a handsome stranger who claims to be Avenlean that she starts considering that the myths could be true.She has nothing more to lose after her 'fairy godparents', as she liked to call them, died in a terrible accident. Or so she is told. Was it really an accident, or was it a targeted attack? Jasmine and Miles forge a deep bond, relying on each other's strengths and unwavering determination. Together, they uncover long-lost secrets, unravel the mysteries of Avenlea's past, and confront powerful adversaries who seek to disrupt the peace of the land.All Rights Reserved

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