Blunt Reviews

UNLOCK YOU

Creativity: 15/15

I feel like this story is more of a self-reflection story. If I'm being honest, it's more of a story of how to get through the Hard days and how to maneuver life. I'm not saying that it's not a creative idea, but I feel like the author, when it comes down to it, is talking more about themselves and unlocking themselves and getting to reflect on themselves than trying to help the audience, But you don't want to go out to dinner. Type thing. It feels more like a friend trying to convince you to go out to dinner.

Originality:10 /15

Do you feel like if some originality here, if I'm being honest? But I don't want to say that it's some. Thing that is 100% original. There are a lot of books out there that self-reflect and are trying to help people overcome whatever it is they need to overcome, whether it's depression, whether it's anxiety, whether it's so. Anxiety, whether it's speech, talking to an audience, etc. This book feels similar to that. The only difference is I feel like this book drives on when it comes down to it. It doesn't just reach its audience like it should reach him. I feel like this is kind of like a diary. But a diary that isn't conveying what it needs to convey. Once again, this is not to be mean or malicious. These are my opinions on this book.

Storytelling: 0/15

Once again, I will go on to say this is not to be mean or malicious. But I don't feel like there's a storytelling there. I mean, I don't get a sense of storytelling. I don't get a sense of connection. I don't get a sense of adventure. I don't get a sense of anything. I feel like I'm a child being talked to about life. Instead of experiencing life and. for me, it's just not working.

Character: 0/15

Cannot really judge characters when it comes to the story. The reason that is is because there are really no characters. Once again, this feels like a diary to me, but a diary that isn't executing very well, and because of that, there is no way for me to connect, and I've tried once again to connect to this. Connect to the story, but I cannot. It's not coming across to the audience as it should, even if it was like a self-help story. The author could do it in many different ways, but I feel it's gone. Flat once again. This is not to be mean or malicious. This is. Simply my opinion. I feel like they're not reaching the audience. I feel like it's a diary that you open for advice, but it. Falls flat. It's not reaching the right audience. It's not reaching anything. And as far as the author as a character, I was to judge the author as a character per se would. Be a very bland character with no sense of adventure, no sense of guidance, no sense of anything. And once again, this is not to be mean. This is not to be malicious. This is not to be hateful. These are just my thoughts. These are my opinions.

Story Flows: 0/15

Once again, I can't say that the story flows well because it doesn't just start in one direction. It gives advice, and I feel like it isn't flowing or getting to the audience it needs. For me, I feel like the advice should be more fun, more playful, and more enlightening. Because at the end of the day, you want to be able to get. Across to your audience, but you also want it to be carefree and charismatic. And there's none of that in this story. Once again, I will go on to say like I always do. This is not me to be mean. This is not to be malicious. This is not to be hateful. This is not to be someone who says, oh, you shouldn't write, or you shouldn't continue writing. I would never say these are just my opinions and thoughts when critiquing a story.

Cover Design: 0/15

Honestly, the cover and the story do not match. Say this because I always read the story, then the real one, and then reassess the cover. And when I was reassessing the cover compared to the story, they didn't match at all. The story is called Unlock You. So, shouldn't it be a little different than a lion? A lion represents strength. A lion represents leadership. A lion represents so many different aspects.  But with the story, there's none of that. So, the lion being part of the Cover does not sit right with the story. 

Final Thoughts:10 /10

My personal advice for this story is I feel like there should be a different cover and I feel like the author should be more lighthearted when giving advice. As somebody who has had an awakening type of thing, I want to say that I have accepted who I am and have gone through life, always growing. Giving advice is hard. Because everybody's growth is a lot different when it comes to this book, I feel like if you're discussing certain aspects of life while. There is growth, whether it be spiritual, money, finances, etc. There are two ways you can do it. You could execute it very fondly, or. 2, you don't really execute it. Once again, this is not to be hateful, mean, or malicious, but the author did not execute this story well. If this story is about the author's growth and what they have gone through, then they need to make it so that they reach the audience. So the audience can connect with them. If it's them giving advice, they need to make it more enthusiastic. They need to make it more fun-loving. They need to make it as if they are talking to their audience and not making it as if this is a diary and this is what's going to happen in the diary. Because even if you're writing it as a diary, you can still have fun with it. And for me, the author doesn't seem like they're having fun with it, and that you can see in their work. Once again, this is not to be malicious. This is not to be hateful. That is not the type of person I am and will never be. I am brutally honest, and this is my brutally honest review. I apologize if this is not the review you wanted; this is the review that you got. At the end of the day, I'm going to stay true to myself, and this is me being true to myself. There are different ways the author could have done the story and still brought it to light. I do wish the author. Good luck in the future, and I hope whichever path they choose to take when it comes to writing, they take my advice into consideration.

Chapters I read:3

Total points:35

Summary of the book:

Embark on a thrilling adventure of self-discovery and motivation! This book isn't just a read; it's a roadmap to unlocking your full potential. Get ready for a rollercoaster of positivity, wisdom, and life-changing insights. Your journey to a motivated and empowered life starts here! 🚀✨

AUTHORS WARNING

Remember that these are, in fact, my thoughts and only mine alone. You do not have to like them or agree with them in any way. But because they are my thoughts, they are final, which means they cannot be swayed or changed in any way. If you do decide to disagree with my thoughts and attack me directly in the comments or DM, I will block you and add you to a block list. Therefore, never reviewing your work ever again.

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