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Creativity:15 /15 The author writes this as very creative. I love the whole aspect of having it about sisters. That's very interesting. The story is just perfect and beautiful.
Originality:15 /15 I don't think I've ever read a story like this, and that's what makes it so original. In a factor, the story flows well, and the author's writing is just beautiful.
Storytelling:15 /15 I feel like with the storytelling, I'm watching it through a sister's eyes like a sister is the one telling the story instead of an author or a third person, and that's okay. I still appreciate it and enjoy it.
Character:15 /15 I finally found the characters to be intriguing. I found them to be very interesting and unique at the same time.
Story Flows:15 /15 I didn't see anything wrong with the story. Everything flowed very well. There was no structural error. There was nothing out of place; every sentence was written to flow perfectly.
Cover Design:15 /15 The cover is gorgeous, complements the story, and goes well with the story 100%.
Final Thoughts:10 /10 I honestly did not find anything wrong with the story. I enjoyed it; I enjoyed the way that the author brought the story together, and I enjoyed how creative the author was. I enjoyed the story. Overall, I wish it would get more likes, views, and votes. I think that this story is impressive, and it needs to be looked up and read. I hope the author has fantastic luck in the future and that this story gets noticed.
Chapters I read: a prologue in three chapters
Total points: 100
Summary of the book:
*Scifi Fantasy Romance*Eighteen-year-old Princess Isla of Velorium strives to distance herself from her sister's romantic entanglements, but her destiny takes a dramatic turn with the arrival of King Kyro. Initially set to marry her older sister for a crucial alliance, Isla is crowned Queen to the most powerful ruler in all galaxies. Her newfound role thrusts her into a world of mysterious curses, a battle with the dark sorceress known as The Golden Witch, and, above all, the inevitable collapse of her realm as a prophecy unfolds.Meet King Kyro, ruler of a Planet called Ventha. The warriors of Ventha have seen many wars. Mysterious and handsome, Kyro's initial proposal of alliance through marriage takes a turn, driven by his rebellious spirit and desires for Isla. He's well-acquainted with curses, magic, and prophecy, going so far as to journey beyond his galaxies to avoid them. In his eyes, the notion of the All-Mother is nothing short of a curse; having witnessed his realm crumble under the weight of dark magic, he is determined to go to any lengths to prevent the dark forces from wreaking havoc on his world again.𝐑𝐚𝐭𝐞𝐝 𝐌𝐚𝐭𝐮𝐫𝐞; gore, violence, and adult themes.16+ recommended
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