The God's Game

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Creativity: 15/15

I actually like the way that's authored in the story. The story is very different than what I was expecting, but the way that the author did it was interesting. The creativity and the imagination that the author put into the story Has you wanting to read more from the prolog to the third chapter.


Originality: 15/15

For me, this is definitely an original story. I have not read anything like this and I actually enjoyed the story a lot because of the way that the author wrote the story. The author wrote it in such a way that there were times I forgot that I was at the end of the story and I had to remember to comment on that chapter. It was a really good story.


Storytelling: 15/15

When it came to this part of the story, I feel like the author did a really good job at storytelling. They really brought you into the atmosphere and really brought you into the world of storytelling. The way that the author did this story was out of the box. Amazing. It was really unique to read how they did it, especially when it came to like the royalty and family and the dynamics of everything. It was interesting because at the end of the day you can always tell no matter what's going on. Families always important.


Character:15 /15

I loved the characters and the reason I love the character so much is to test the way that's author did the characters. They put humor into each character and they put a sense of personality. When it comes to stories like this, it makes me love reading and revering because you can really see the character shine through with the personalities they have now. There are some stories that I have read where you can't really see or feel the personalities and with that it just falls flat. So when it comes to characters, there are two ways you can do it. 1 you can really make them shine and have their own personality, their own life or two where it's just kind of falls flat. This author did not disappoint when it came to the characters and the creating of the characters at all.


Story Flows: 15/15

There is nothing wrong with the story at all when it came to the flow of story or grammar errors, or even sentence structure.


Cover Design:15 /15

The cover represents the story very well, and it's beautiful


Final Thoughts: 10/10

I kind of this author has a lot of talent, but once again it's a story that's not really getting represented really well or getting acknowledged really well. And that's what's really sad and makes me kind of hate being on this site because authors that deserve the praise that need to be recognized are not getting recognized. For me, this all there did a phenomenal job on the story as well as even doing that phenomenal job on the characters. The story was very, very interesting to read. It had so much detail, so much beauty, so much mystery in it And it's these stories that I feel need to be represented more when it comes to this website. I love the story and I do hope that the author gets more acknowledgment for the beautiful story they have.


Chapters I read:

prolog in first three chapters.


Total points:100


Summary of the book:

Meet River Verlice.The second prince of the Northern royal family and a descendant of a god.Except that the said god had completely abandoned him. He was refused a name at birth, has little to no divine essence, and was confined in the desolated east wing of the castle his whole life.Meet Raven Alistair.The youngest of the Southern royal line. The illegitimate heir, who came as wind, slayed eleven siblings to emerge as the king.One night. One banquet. One God given mission.River Verlice finds his whole life turned upside down as he embarks on a journey with the unruly Southern king. What awaits the awkward prince on his adventure? Is it new frienships ? Powerful foes ? Or shadowy chapters of his own life that he wish he never discovered ?


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