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Creativity:15 /15 I definitely feel like the creativity is there, and that's what I love about it: there is a lot of creativity in the way the story is warming. And that's something that I can appreciate the way that the story is
Originality:15 /15 I can definitely tell you that it is a very original story, and that's what I love about original stories. The way that the Pro lock starts and brings you right into the story is something that I can appreciate. And the way that you know what the story is going to be based on in the journey, I loved it.
Storytelling: 10/15 I will say that I love the storytelling. The prologue is done very well. The prologue is supposed to be small. They're supposed to be sure to bring you into the story. The one thing that I am going to say that I do not like, and I will say it until the day I take my last breath. YouTube videos are not a thing for me as a reader. I cannot turn them off, and with that being said, it isn't very pleasant to have to turn them off in order to read a story. Once you turn to the new chapter in the book, the YouTube video goes on running, and it's so loud and distracting that it takes away from wanting to read the story. Not many people argue and say that it helps with the story. It helps get you in the mood, helps with character development, and gives you a sense of whatever. Maybe it does or doesn't for me; it throws me off, and I don't want to continue reading a story. Because if I have to go through every single chapter to turn off a YouTube video so that I can enjoy a story, then I don't want to read the story; there's no point in reading it for me. Because at the end of the day, why should I have to turn off the YouTube video to enjoy a good story? Your YouTube video that you just did to make a point across to me, regardless of what that is the YouTube video has pushed me to the point where I don't want to read a story. And that is the truth: if I have to pause the video to read a story, I'm not going to continue reading the story. I don't want to continue reading a novel because the video took away from something I already enjoyed.
Character: 15/15 There's only one character that I know for sure, and that is about their life and journey, and that's the main character. And I love that you see the worries, concerns, and care to development when it comes to her journey. She wants to become a doctor. You know her journey will not be easy because she's all about family, and she has to leave her family to pursue her dreams. But at the same time, I feel like it will either make or break her, and you can feel that in the first chapter, along with the prologue, you can feel the hesitation but, simultaneously, the excitement.
Story Flows:15 /15 The story flow is there. The story flows very nicely. There's nothing I saw that was out of place. It flowed very nicely. It was a lovely story. Everything seemed to be where it should be, and I loved that.
Cover Design:15 /15 I will say the cover is very unique. The lettering goes well with the cover, and I really like it. It looks kind of like an anime cover to me. Which I'm not against it's very beautiful, very blue and I love it.
Final Thoughts: 10/10 At the end of the day, the thing that bothered me the most was the fact that they put YouTube videos, and once again, people will disagree with me with that. But at the end of the day, YouTube videos really do take away from the story for me as a reader because I have to pause that, and then after I pause them, I have to hope that they stay paused because if not, it ruins the story because they continue to play regardless if I pause them or not. Besides that, the story was a really good, unique story, and I enjoyed it.
Chapters I read:a prologue in the first chapter
Total points: 95
Summary of the book:
In a city pulsing with dreams and ambitions, two souls navigate a world where passion battles expectations.Radhika Agarwal, driven by a haunting childhood memory, strives to shatter the shackles of unaffordable medical care. She's determined to become a healer, a beacon of hope in a realm of suffering.Aditya Singh, finding solace on the basketball court, faces a relentless clash between family expectations and his fervent love for the game. His journey is a testament to resilience and passion, pushing the boundaries set by those closest to him.As fate weaves their destinies together, an invisible thread binds them, propelling them toward an extraordinary tale. Amidst the chaos of their lives, a healing bond emerges, reshaping their dreams, their struggles, and their perceptions of happiness."Healing Bond" is an emotional journey through ambitions and adversity, where dreams find voice, and two souls find their purpose in the intricate dance of life.
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