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Authors note: This story has not been published on Wattpad. It is a story still in the writing stages and not on this platform yet. I was asked to review it through Messenger or Discord. I didn't have Discord downloaded then, so they sent it to me in my DM. I will review anything; this is one of those cases, so everyone knows.
Creativity: 15/15 I definitely find that this story is very creative it's very interesting. The way the author writes the story, you can tell that it's very detailed, very beautifully written, and very creative. It is definitely a story I would probably put into my library.
Originality: 15/15 I can honestly say that the originality is definitely there. You can tell that the way the story is written is different from what I have read. It's a very unique, and the way the author writes is just very beautifully written. It is something that I can appreciate as a reader.
Storytelling:15 /15 I love the way the storytelling is. I can honestly say the storytelling is phenomenal. It makes me visually see the characters as if I'm there with them, dealing with everything they are dealing with and seeing them grow as a character. I can feel, experience, understand, and appreciate everything that this character goes through.
Character: 15/15 I'm a big sucker for character development, and I feel like this author has developed their character very well. The character is very, I don't want to say cocky, but the character knows what they want. The character knows they will do anything to protect the people and the village. But at the same time, you know that they will also have ups and downs in the story. The story does exactly what it should do as a character development. You get to see the inside of the character, feel the character's emotions, and witness what the character is dealing with at that time. The fear or not, the sadness, the anger, etc. With this character, I feel like they have no fear right now. But that could change as the story progresses.
Story Flows: 15/15 The story flow is very nice. I have no complaints about how it flows. It flows nicely into each other; there is nothing wrong with it, and everything is beautifully written.
Cover Design: 10/15 I do feel like the cover needs a little work. It's a beautiful cover. Do not get me wrong; it is the font that gets me. I feel like a different font would work better with the cover and the beauty of the cover. Right now, the thought and the cover do not blend in beautifully, so I feel like they don't work.
Final Thoughts:10 /10 At the end of the day, I felt like the story was perfect. It brings you in and keeps you wondering what will happen next. The author does a phenomenal job on character development and how they write the story. It is a story that I would 100% put into my breeding list just because I would want to know what happened to it. Chapters I read: I read all the branches that were sent to me
Total points: 95
Summary of the book: Unfortunately, I cannot summarize the book here because the book was sent to me through messenger.
AUTHORS WARNING
Remember that these are, in fact, my thoughts and only mine alone. You do not have to like them or agree with them in any way. But because they are my thoughts, they are final, which means they can not be swayed or changed in any way. If you do decide to disagree with my thoughts and attack me directly in the comments or DM, I will block you and add you to a block list. Therefore, never reviewing your work ever again.
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