Philkas falling in a different way MESSAGING BOOK 1

13 The cabin

Philip

Philip sat down on the bed once they entered the cabin Lukas's dad owned while he checked for viewers. Lukas wondered over to the fridge getting a beer.

"Uch only one"Lukas complained grabbing it"Don't drop it"throwing it in the process Philip shaking his head smirking"Nice"They laughed.

Philip picked it up and opened it beer exploding everywhere"Oh come on" Lukas sat down"Are you kidding me thanks"Philip took a gulp passing it over as they looked at each other.

"How many hits did I get" Lukas wondered Philip checked"Ur 22 in less then 5 minuet that's not bad actually" Philip told him"Mm that's good" Lukas took another gulp."No damn that's good hey any comments?"

Lukas leaned over to look at Philips phone"Rose says your DOPE" They moved closer together. "Yeah whatever" Lukas ignored the comment.

"There's a kid at school called Tommy he told me he has a DS alarm I'm gonna borrow it cause the resolution on it is so sick it is so much better then my phone" Philip explained Lukas nodded.

"The sponsors are gonna flip out over this" Lukas told Philip"Really? Like is that good" Philip wondered Philip hands him the phone taking a gulp of beer then putting it down on the wooden flooring.

"Yeah it's so amazing the video footage is really good I mean your amazing.... I mean your awesome" Lukas leans side ways and looks into Philips eyes.

Then Philip starts to lean on closer then.........

Should I really base this on the actual story just change the writing and how it's done??