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||August Alsina||
I woke up and I had the worse headache. To make it worse I heard someone running up and down the hall way. I looked around I was unfamiliar with my surroundings. I looked over on the nightstand and seen a picture of Kayla and Anthony. I smiled. I got up and made my way downstairs to see Kayla cooking. I came up behind her
"You cook na?" I whispered in her ear.
She turned around and smiled. "Yes! Now what would you like to eat? I made pancakes, eggs, sausage and biscuits."
"I'll like everything... But there's one thing missing from what i'd like ta eat."
"What's that?" She smirked
"You-"
"Daddy!?" Anthony ran up and grabbed my leg.
"What's up luh' man?" I asked
"Nothing. I'm just hungry. When did you get hea? I called you yesterday. Me and ma. I thought you forgot about us."
"I'd neva forget about y'all. I love y'all."
"Ohh shit!" Kayla turned back around and turned the stove off
"Y'all ready to eat?" She askedI nodded and Anthony chanted. We ate and then I left and went back home. On my way I called Camille.
"August?!" I called you all fucking night lastnight!! Where the fuck was you!!" She yelled
"Yo, chill tha fuck out. My heads hurtin' an shit. Damn. I spent tha night at my mama house."
"Why August?!"
"Cause I was too drunk ta drive. Open tha door." I said getting out the car. She opened the door and I was greeted with a mug.
She sniffed me. "Why you smell like a woman and weed."
"I was smoking befo' I drunk an I was at my Mama's house. Na' stop asking me all these questions."
"I'm sorry." She said
"You good."
"You made me feel sooo good yestersay baby!" She smiled
I laughed. "I bet I did."
"Yes. Make up sex is the best."
"Tell me about it.." I said referring to lastnight with Kayla. Of course I took a shower and all that before I chilled with Chris's and went to Kayla's.
All of a sudden I felt my pants being pulled down and my dick being pulled ouy of my briefs. Camille wrapped her warm mouth around me and took me deep inside her mouth. I tried to stop her but she kept on so I let her. Who am I to block her from her blessing.
||India Westbrooks-Bailey||
"Baby! I have the results!!!" I yelled to Daveontae
"Forreal? Open the letter." He said pulling his falling pants up while running towards me.
I opened the letter and if read that "D'Micah"
REAL name is
Devontae Dee Bailey. And DNA matches me and Daveontae's
I dropped the paper, fell to my knees and cried. "That bitch took stole my son!!!" I screamed
"Mommy! What's wrong?" Iesha came in
"Nothing honey, you know how we told you had a twin brother but he didn't get to make it home?"
She nodded.
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Love Changed [Book 2] (Not Edited)
FanfictionYOU MUST READ LOVE DON'T COST A THING IN ORDER TO UNDERSTAND THIS BOOK. This Is The Sequel. ⚠ WARNING ⚠ This Story Contains Violence, Explicit Language, and Strong Sexual Content. ⚠ You've Been Warned ⚠ Copyright © 2015 All rights reserved by Shy'Ri...