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Okay so I had a plan for the story of how Lucy does come back and talk things through with Tim about her childhood things like that.
Things get I don't know what right word is but basically it's a little mission to get her back.
She does go back. But obviously it's a little longer than her turning back now. I just don't want people to be annoyed that she left or that there is so much go into this childhood thing or about the cliff hangers as they may be a couple. So I could be overthinking this.
Or I can delete what I've written and I will delete the last few chapters back to where Lucy wakes up. And she doesn't leave.
What do you guys think?

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