Book: Billion Dollar Problems
Author: demidork25
Summary: 3.5/5
Your summary is well written. It's captivating but you can make it more attractive. It just needs some polishing.
Grammar: 4/5
There are very few mistakes. If we look too hard, we can see the mistakes. Overall, you have a good vocabulary.
Character Building: 4/5
The characters are good. You have expressed each character clearly, without too many messy attitudes. I personally like Kristy, James and Alexis, and even Paisley. You have done some good work; just don't mess their emotions and don't confuse them.
Writing Style: 4.5/5
Your writing style is very good. There is flow and rhythm. You have used very impressive vocabulary. Even I have learned a lot of new words while reading your book. Good style.
Plot Uniqueness: 4.5/5
You have a new, captivating plot. There is romance, teen struggle, billionaire, and many other things. I personally like it and I am gonna read it all again.
Overall Score: 20.5 /25
Important thing I wanna say: your book cover doesn't look very captivating and it doesn't fit the size. Also, I saw you had many other attractive book covers in your author's note. I will recommend you to use the one of them or the first one.
I hope this review helps you hone your skills. It's mostly just polishing the grammar and dialogue and taking full care if characters action don't mess them. Keep up the great work.
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