Title: Just Survive
Author: nicolettem64
Reviewer: lee-louw
Summary: 5/5
Your summary sparked a lot of interest in me. On point detail. Great character and conflict introduction. I wouldn't suggest you change anything!
Grammar: 5/5
You edited well. No grammar mistakes, no spelling mistakes. Nothing.
Character building: 5/5
I don't know what to say. All your characters left a great impression; the two main one's as well as your extras.
Writing style: 5/5
Easy to read and understand all that's happening.
Plot uniqueness: 4/5
I love the whole concept of moving on and though it isn't the main point in the story, I also love how your two main characters are still humane even in a world where it's 'one man for himself.' I can only hope they don't lose that side of themselves in the midst of the chaos. The way their stories are different but intertwine is something that I adore.
OVERALL SCORE: 24/25
If your book was a movie, I probably would've cried 10 seconds in. It's a good thing you did some editing because I really think it'd be great if you entered your book into some competitions! A job well done!
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