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Book name: The Empress Of Doom

Reviewer: Narayani_writes

Author name: scrabblepost

Title: 10/10

The title is totally apt for the book since the story revolves around the life of Enavee.

Cover: 10/10

I loved the cover a lot. Its temperature is cool and it attracts the reader. Its quite classy, simple and serene. The author is quite witty while choosing the cover.

Blurb: 8/10

The blurb is quite okay. Although it makes the reader think about the book, but I will suggest the author to add something more, so that it creates suspense and would make the readers peep into it. You can also add any extract from the book. I loved the book a lot and I want more and more readers to attract towards it.

Prologue/ Starting of the book: 9.5/10

Its quite sensible of author to add pronounciations and prior knowledge about the story by giving maps. I felt the achievement things unnecessary but I leave the decision with the author. Talking about chapter zero, I would like to suggest the author to give the title prologue and not chapter zero since it might sound absurd to some readers.

Originality: 10/10

The plot is quite impressive. One could see the originality of the plot in the book. The author has properly used her imagination skills for the same. It properly shows how creative the author is.

Plot: 10/10

I have fallen for the plot. The hard work of author is highly reflected from her words. Plot is quite intriguing and it compels the readers to read further.

Grammar: 9.5/10

Frankly speaking, I really wanted to give her full marks here. There's hardly any grammatical mistakes in it. I am astonished to found not even autocorrect mistake. But since I found slight errors in those.

Some of those are like: Enevaa felt her stomach churched. According to me , it should not be churched but it should go as 'Enevaa felt her stomach churned in fear'. The other I found is Vishma saying : 'I truly am immortal' which sounds quite wierd while reading. As per mine views, it should be : ' I am truly an immortal'. These are some of the smallest errors I could rectify.

Character Development: 10/10

I am in love how the characters develop slowly and steadily. The way Tavya uses her cunning mind, her rages, the hatred of Enavee towards her grandmother, her utmost love for her brother is really worth reading. The development of characters is at a proper pace which many of the books often lack.

Writing skills: 8.5/10

I have no words for the author's writing skills. Her vocab and the way she efficiently writes the scenes are amazing. The last fighting scene was also good, but I found it a very very little monotonous. But at the end when she finally burns everything, that scene gave me goosebumps. The way author started the chapter zero was just like a movie. Each and every scene was shown with such a beautiful description especially about the nature. What I felt was lack of portraying emotions. For instance, in the prior , when she hatred her grandmother, the emotions were not that much properly explained. The pain when her brother died too could be properly executed. This is the only reason I deduced the marks here.

Overall enjoyment: 10/10

As I have already stated, the book is very very intriguing. Each chapter compels you to read more. The execution of plot was splendid indeed. I truly enjoyed the book. It was really worth reading.

Total: 95.5/10

Special note: I really appreciate the writing skills of author, her way execution and everything. Kudos to the writer for coming up with such a great plot. I would suggest the readers to give a view to this book, since its really worth reading. A complete package of mystery, thrills and emotions it is. I have no words left to say for this book. Hope I haven't disappointed you and I have tried my best to give honest reviews.

Thanks for choosing me as a reviewer.