જ The Mattress Still Has Your Body On It And I Am Not Sure Why જ ☾Priyu☽

29 3 0
                                    

Author: bedframehardmattress
Title: The mattress still has your body on it and I am not sure why.
Reviewer: emotionheartless 

Title : 7/10 

 The title was too long .. author need to shorten her title to max four words 

 Cover :- 12/15 

 The cover was nice but author needs to modify it because it only has the name of book and nothing else so it seems to be a little less attractive. 

 Content :- 37.5/40
( grammar and punctuation, content creativity , plot , originality ) 

 I read the entire book .. the overall chapters were amazing.. I liked them. Author has clearly separated all the scenes and the plot is quite interesting but the things I found somewhere are like the use of nouns and then following words and sentences formation in this which needs a little modification. 

 Writing skills :- 20/20

 She is a good narrative, art piece builder .. she can excel and reach up to heights 

 Overall enjoyment :-15/15 

 I really enjoyed reading this .... I would prefer readers to try this once 

 Total marks :- 91.5/100 

 Have a good day ❤️

Bluebell Review Chamber [CLOSED]Where stories live. Discover now