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જ Sky of the Nights જ ☾Gracie☽

Book title: Sky of the Nights

Author: allen_stories

Reviewer: Veil_Of_Darkness

Cover (7/10)

The cover can be improved a lot. The current symbolic representation of the cover is a bit too plain and only focuses on the sideline. You can add certain specific elements which widens the aspect a bit more.

Title (10/10)

 The title of the book is apt and unique. It is quite relevant to the storyline and yes, it has a mesmerizing effect with mysterious feel lingering around it.

Blurb (7/10)

The blurb is a teeny weeny too short though it contains the key line of the story. Also, there is a slight mistake here – "one of the biggest spy agency in the country". It has to be changed to "agencies" to have it grammatically correct. You do can improve the blurb by adding a few more lines that has a hooking effect so that it attracts more readers.

Writing style (10/10)

 Your writing style is perfect. You describe the scenarios when and required with excellent expression of emotions. Amazing.

Characterization (10/10)

 All the characters have been expressed amazingly. Their emotions, their hobbies, their lifestyle – you name it! It is perfect and upto the point.

Plot (9/10)

 The plot of your book is quite nice with the story moving in a good pace – neither too slow nor too fast. But something that I did not get was the usage of the term "sex-slave". Even on the first day of her job, Max treated her nicely. Taking her to parties, lovely talks etc. I don't think that particular phrase is actually apt in the storyline.

Grammar and vocabulary (3/10)

You have an amazing plot, a good writing and perfect characterization but the beauty of all these are hidden by slight grammatical, spelling and punctuational errors. Your book needs a good editing so that it can be well-appreciated.

First chapter (6/10)

 The first chapter of your book is great. As said before, the scenes and surroundings have been beautifully expressed though there are a lot of grammatical errors.

Theme (10/10)

 The story is generically relevant, has got an apt title, beautifully expressed characters, broken hearts and the rest – all the perfect ingredients of a good romance novel added with a pinch of action.

Personal Enjoyment (8/10)

 I personally enjoyed the book a lot though I was confused at that sex slave part. The only thing your book needs is a thorough editing and revision by good experts and then it is perfectly splendiferous. Keep writing.

Total points: 80/100

Thank you for choosing me as your reviewer. Have a great day.