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Book Name:- Rich Kids
Author:- ghodeypesawarx
Reviewer:- WisnolWeasley

Title:- The Title of the story tells the reader what they can expect from the story. It is really an art to name a book, but in this case, I thought that it was very straightforward. A straightforward title really helps the readers to cling on to the main conflict of the story and dive deep into it. 8/10

Cover:- It is more likely for a reader to read a book if it has an exciting and non revealing title. The use of light colours and the 5 five friends hanging around really gave a gist of what the story can basically be without revealing the plot twists. Also the inclusion of the subtitle really gets the reader for what is to come next. 9/10

Blurb:- The Blurb focuses directly on the 'Knight In The Shining Armour' Plot of the story which is basically the thing around which the entire drama revolves. Showcasing only the important aspect without leaking the main story is a Blurb well done. 15/15

Conflict:- The Conflict is the Heart and soul of a book, if it latches on to the Reader's mind, you are halfway through. In this case the Conflict is made pretty obvious from the very start, which would have been underwhelming but the efficient and quirky twists have done a great job in lifting the story up. I personally thought that the writer should have focused more on some of the sub plots more as they would have enhanced the conflict, but given the fact that it is their first time, the job was well done! 23/25

The Characters:- Personally I really connected with all the characters of the story and their ambitions. All of them were portrayed in a shade of grey which makes them so compelling and unique. Each character has been given sufficient time, but I think a bit of foreshadowing before any of the characters did something major in the story could have really helped. 19/20

Grammar & Vocabulary:- I personally feel that if the plot of the story is great, average grammar mistakes can be overlooked. However the story has its ups and downs, and during the down phases when it was the most vulnerable, the grammar stood up like a black dot on a white paper. The vocabulary used is great as well and does a wonderful job to understand what our Protagonist is thinking. 13/15

Bonus Point:- These are some things which I loved in the story. I believe the images used just before the chapters start near the header were wonderful. It really helped me to imagine the characters and feel emotionally connected with them. Kudos for those beautiful visuals! 5/5

Overall:- I really loved reading the book. I also loved the fact that the writer tried to motivate the audience by telling them that 'Howerer big the problem is, there's always a way out.' 92/100

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