જ Obscure Love જ ☾Priyu☽

26 4 6
                                    

Book name: obscure love

Author: Sahni_2007

Reviewer: emotionheartless

Title: 10/10

The title was way perfect and thrilling making a reader excited to peep in to know more

Cover - 15/15

Cover was good and impressive

Content:- 34/40 ( grammar and punctuation, content creativity, plot, originality)

I really liked the theme and the plot that the author wanted to show...the story was perfect but the author is not so good in grammar and vocab skills..she really needs to do lot of improvement...infact she is leaving some sentence incomplete in between which is confusing..so i would suggest the author to go through the chapter once again before Posting

Writting skills:- 17/20

I can say that he/she is really an amazing writer. Passionate and dedicated towards her story, perfect emotions are potrayed with perfect character and need of time. But her potraying and presentation was not upto mark which made me deduct her marks

Overall enjoyment :-14.5/15

There is no way to say that you didn't enjoyed or you will not enjoy...I highly recommend people to read this book and you will not regret opening it.

Total marks- 90.5/100

Have a good day❤️

Bluebell Review Chamber [CLOSED]Where stories live. Discover now