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જ Ricochet જ ☾ Claire☽

Author: DeejayDJ010

Reviewer: ClaireMari29

Notes To The Author: Thank you for being my first client to be reviewed in this community, and at the same time, I appreciated your patience while I conduct your review, once again, everything in this review will be based upon my opinions and my beliefs, and I hope so you’ll understand.

Cover, Title, and Blurb: 27.5/30

The title Ricochet somehow makes me believe it suits your work, which is great for me, what I found to make it a little different was your cover, it was somehow simple for me, yet I believed you should add more dark elements in order to resemble the “Ricochet” term, in your blurb lastly, I believed you had made it fair enough, yet give more details, why readers can be hooked and interested to read on your work, try to give more sneak peek on what happens in your work at the same time, that’s how you can improve your blurb.

Grammar and Writing Style: 27.5/30

After reading 5 chapters of your work, I had seen few grammar errors, I believed you need to proofread it as it can help identify at the same time in where you had made some errors of your work. But the way you picked your writing style as 3rd POV was good, I can see that you are using the descriptive style of 3rd POV, and it can also help readers identify what’s going over for the story, which is good.

Storyline and Plot: 25/30

Okay, I rated this part as 25, for the matter that in one chapter, the contents are too long and because of this, I almost felt like I would stop reading it due to the said matter, yet, the good news in this category is that I am getting the vibes that Jaime has from his character arc after I read 5 chapters, and so the plot is going straight as how you read the blurb at the same time.
The pace is good, yet in one chapter, there are too many details…

Reviewer and Reader Satisfaction: 7/10

This book seems new to me, yet I believed I liked it for matter the plot was good and interesting,
I suggest taking the improvements that I mentioned, and you’re good to go.

Total: 87/100