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જ The Great Escape જ ☾Michael☽

Book: The Great Escape
Author: Apple_Brooklyn
Reviewer: s-starryknight
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Title: It fits well, it may not feel very original however it intrigues the reader!

Cover: I love it so much! It fits the story well and it just looks really nice.

Blurb: It hypes your story up very well, it invigorates mystery and shock, it definitely draws in readers

Plot: The plot is interesting, it takes a while to start getting into dramatic territory but I enjoy it!

Characters: The characters in the story work very well. They don't feel flat and boring, they feel like they could all be real people.

Flow of story: The story feels quite slow paced, the first few chapters don't progress very far and I fell like it could be condensed a bit, other than that the story flows well

Grammar: Your grammar is great, I have no problems with it!

Writing Style: I like the way you write things, however I think the story is very slow paced, it dragged out many scenes into whole chapters unnecessarily so I would suggest possibly working on that

Enjoyment: I quite enjoyed this, it was a very nice read

Conclusion: The book has a great story and use of characters however it's only issue is how slow the story is, other than that it is a great book!