Book: Unwanted Marriage
Author: 1234vidhi
Reviewer: emotionheartless
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Title : 9.5/10
The title was good and appropriate but was too common
Cover : 12 /15
The cover was having too much blending and darkness i would suggest author to change the cover as this cover doesn't go well with story ..... Cover is not attractive and eye catchy
Content: 29/40 ( grammar and punctuation, content creativity , plot , originality )
Plot was good , story line was good but the way of writting the verbs , nouns adjectives were not properly used . If English is her third or second language then she should better try to write in the language she is comfortable because writting in English is something I would not suggest to her as it's removing intrest from reader's mind
Writting skills: 15/20
She is a good writer and has good plots in her minds she just need to remove her mistakes
Overall enjoyment: 13/15
I am really sorry to say this but
Due to those errors and lack of words i didn't enjoy it completely.....
Total marks :- 78.5 /100
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