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Book: Stacked
Author: _WildStar_
Reviewer: RoasterSultana
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Title: 9/10
The name suited well for the book.

Chapter Title: 9/10
Perfect title for the chapter! It tells a lot of the story and its paranormal subject. It's just that a title like this is not hard to come by.

Cover: 8/10
It looks great and aesthetic, but the title was too blurry. Besides that, good cover for an ambiguous book!

Grammar: 7/10
Good grammar, just do some checking and fix some sentence formations because these mistakes make the story unclear to readers. You forgot to give the (") in some dialogues.

Overall enjoyment: 8/10
I enjoyed it very much! Just could have been better if the writing was more clear. You should try to add more about the characters' feelings to make the story more interesting. It gets readers more invested.

In conclusion: 41/50
The story made me more interested in reading one-shots! You're a really good one-shot writer, just try to make the sentences more clear. I believe continuing the story would be wonderful!