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Book: Just One Smile
Author: i_love_you_RM
Reviewer: idkmayastyles
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Title: 8/10
I really like the title 'Just one smile' because it's unique, and it sets the scene for the book.

Cover: 4/10
The cover is not the best, mainly because the title really blends in with the picture, so for some people, it can be hard to see. I really like the color scheme of the cover.

Blurb: 10/15
I think the blurb is the perfect length but I think the extract from the book could be a little shorter, but overall good.

Plot and concept 14/20
I like the idea but I feel like it's very overused by writers on Wattpad.

Content and chapters: 12/15
The chapter lengths are really good and the content is a good amount for the chapters.

Writing skills: 5/10
Sometimes you make grammar mistakes or you add full stops when not necessary and sometimes the sentences don't make much sense but your writing is not the worst.

Overall and extra comments: 53/80
This review is based on the first five chapters. I think you should go through the book as a reader and just fix the grammar mistakes and fix some sentences that don't make sense.