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Book: Summer Paradise
Author: Seong_Grace
Reviewer: prxttyslut
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Title: 8/10
The title is good and tells you a bit about the story.

Cover: 9/10
I love the cover because the colours are amazing and the text is positioned well.

Blurb: 13/15
The blurb says quite a bit of the story so it lets you know what's going on but it also holds a sense of mystery which I really like.

Plot and concept: 15/20
I personally really like this plot and i like the main idea of it and with all the supernatural powers it just makes it better.

Content and chapters: 9/15
I think the chapters are a bit too short but but the content is still pretty good.

Writing skills: 2/10
Your writing styles is really good but you had like 0 paragraphs or way too long paragraphs so I think that needs improving.

Overall and extra comments: 56/80
This review is based off of the first four chapters because in the request you said four so that's all I did but anyway maybe fix your paragraphs and make some and then it will be amazing.