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જ Reflections: The Other Side જ ☾ Mika ☽

Book: Reflections: The Other Side (Book one)

Author: midnightdancexx

Reviewer: TemikaSingh

Cover: 8/15

I didn't understand the cover at first. The height difference especially. When I began the story and went further into it I finally understood it was a story about a father and daughter. Although I dothink you could work on it. Make it more eye catching. Perhaps the font you use for your title could be changed?

Title: 8/10

It fits perfectly with the cover and the story line, well done to you for achieving that– not many authors do.

Synopsis: 15/15

I LOVED it. Introducing our main characters in your synopsis by just giving their names as if they were introducing themselves was very creative! The rest of the information was given in a way that makes a reader see things from a celebrities view. It's interesting with a hint of mystery. Perfect combo in my opinion!

Punctuation: 8/10

Good punctuation. There were a few errors as I went deeper into the book. I recommend you go over the book once more to scope it out.

Grammar: 5/15

Writing skills/Pace of the story: 1/10

Poor format that made it very difficult for me to read. Most readers prefer the text to start from the margin. Poets mostly begin using the middle. Please keep that in mind.

The pace was good during the prologue but it varied as I went further into the story. Certain chapters had information that was not needed and certain chapters didn't give enough information to understand the context.

Overall enjoyment: 8/15

I really enjoyed the prologue and the first few chapters and was excited to continue. Unfortunately I was disappointed as it started to make less sense and it got harder to read due to the format. I personally don't like to read a book when the character talks to the reader all of the time. I suggest you cut down on that. It's good to engage with your readers but not ALL THE TIME.

Total: 53/90