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જ Always there for you જ ☾ June ☽

Book name: Always there for you

Author name: Jannat_Story

Reviewer Name: june_berrin

❥ Title: 6/10

The title suits the story very well. It gives a gist of the story plot. Even though it is a bit common title it still went well with this story. A great title overall.

❥ Cover: 3/10

The cover was not that appealing or attractive. Maybe you could add a colour to them or something. It was too bland and the story title was not that visible. One picture is enough and gives it a colour to make it better. So I suggest you change or modify your cover a bit as the cover is what attracts the reader.

❥ Blurb: 7/10

A well-written blurb. I love your word of choice and it would have gone very well if not for the grammatical errors you have made. The blurb gave off just the right amount from the story and editing it a bit could make it even better.

❥ Storyline: 10/15

The storyline was great and not that cliche. The story began very smoothly with the protagonist's thoughts and which I loved. Your writing style is smooth. Adding something a bit more unique without the need of changing the entire story could help your story be even better. All chapters were ended very well with little cliffhangers which enticed the reader to read more. The story has the perfect pace and great content.

❥ Characters: 11/15

The characters were well portrayed and developed. But sometimes you have failed to capture the emotions of your characters, so I suggest you should work on it a bit more. But still great characters.

❥ Grammar and punctuations: 15/20

You have a really good word choice but your sentence structuring needs a lot of work. You have great words but you didn't place them very well so it could flow together smoothly, but reading it I could feel that the author has tried very hard to structure it well. So I suggest you read other books on Wattpad which will only help your writing but also helps you in finding your writing style.

Some of your paragraphs were too long so I suggest that you break them down a bit so that the reader could read them easier. And lack of punctuation and wrong punctuation was found, which could be corrected by a bit of proofreading.

❥Overall enjoyment: 8/10

The book is really great and I enjoyed reading it a lot. All chapters ended perfectly enticing me to read more.

❥ Conclusions: 7/10

The story was great and smooth. Despite the words not flowing very well together you still have managed to touch the reader's heart. I really got interested in reading your story full after reading the first chapter. You have a good writing style that needs some improvements. This book has a lot of potential. Great job!!

Total: 67/100

Thank you so much for giving me the chance to review your story.

It was a great story and I enjoyed it!

Best Wishes!