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Book: Sinfully Imperfect
Author: EefaKhan
Reviewer: prxttyslut
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Title:  7/10
I really like the title it's good for the story and eye catching

Cover:  5/10
The cover in my opinion has too many things going on and is messy but it's not the worst

Blurb: 11/15
The blurb tells you the story and how it's going to be a good story about their lives but in my opinion could be summarised a bit shorter

Plot and concept: 17/20
The plot is really good with how they are just surviving in their own ways and it's about their lives and i just really like the concept of this book

Characters: 19/20
I really like the characters and that's all i have to say they show emotions and you can really get to know them

Content and chapters: 12/15
I think that the paragraphs are extremely long so they could be shorter or just split up because at times it can be quite annoying but the chapters are a good length.

Writing skills: 7/10
Your writing skills are really good but at some points you accidentally add full stops instead of commas and at times just doesn't make much sense but overall really good

Overall and extra comments: 78/100
I really liked the idea of the story and you did a good job maybe just read through it as a reader and just correct a few spelling/grammar mistakes and then it will be even better but well done you did a good job

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