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by heather_community

Author: allen_stories
Reviewer: K_worlddd

Cover: 8/10
I'd suggest you to smudge the characters in the background.

Description: 9/10
Preferably remove some details. It's giving out too many details.

Storyline: 15/15
The story is overall amazing. Preferably kindly give some intro sought of thing for the characters and make the chapter a bit smaller with more cliffhangers. You can add more twists

Grammar and punctuation: 15/20

Overall enjoyment: 10/10
I loved your content still try working and enhancing it

Blurb : 9.75/10

Characters : 15/15
The members you chose are pretty interesting
Try adding english nicknames too
at some extend it becomes confusing

Tips: Aesthetics and preface would make your story look more professional