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જ Happenstance of love જ ☾ Priyu ☽

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Book: Happenstance of love

Author: sarada3003

Reviewer: emotionheartless

Title: 10/10

It was perfectly suitable as a title clearly justifying the real sense of the story ... Clearly signifying what the story relates about.

Cover:- 10 /15

This cover was fine but I didn't find it related to the theme of the story she has expressed ...so I would like to suggest her create some more innovative covers or she can order a cover from any graphic designer.

Content:- 37/40 ( grammar and punctuation, content creativity, plot, originality )

There were no mistakes at all and the way the author has written it shows the good hold of him/her in grammar ....she has done a lot of hard work while writing this and the plot that she choose is also amazing. I deducted her three marks because I felt that at some places she was lagging behind in vocabulary and she needs to give a little effort in coming up with it.

Writing skills:- 18/20

I can say that he/she is really an amazing writer. The way she has written her story is something which will make you fall in love with it ... author seems to be dedicated to her work. She is totally smitten by her theme ...no doubt in her hard work. I will just suggest her to give some more clear endings as it was a bit confusing.

Overall enjoyment:-15/15

There is no way to say that you didn't enjoy it or you will not enjoy it...ita a perfect mixture of every feeling and I really can't stop appreciating such a beautiful masterpiece ...I highly recommend people to read this book and you will not regret opening it.

Total marks:- 90/100

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