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Book name: the age of dawn Leo Valdez

Author: lia_writes_sometimes

Reviewer: emotionheartless

Title: 8.5/10

The title was too long to be called as a title of the story..author should try more innovative idea to transform the title in short one

Cover 15/15

Cover was quite good..i am
impressed..

Content - 37/40 ( grammar and punctuation, content creativity, plot, originality)

I really liked the theme and the plot that the author wanted to show... But the story was so continous that even when she has used full stop it looks like it was not needed...it's just it is becoming confusing sometimes otherwise it's all perfect

Writting skills: 18.5/20

I can say that he/she is really an amazing writer. Passionate and dedicated towards her story, perfect emotions are potrayed with perfect character and need of time. Just she needs a Lil improvement in potraying

Overall enjoyment :-15/15

There is no way to say that you didn't enjoyed or you will not enjoy...I highly recommend people to read this book and you will not regret opening it.

Total marks :- 94/100

Have a good day❤️

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