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Book: Lupita: The New Beginning
Author: AlanaTurner37
Reviewer: prxttyslut
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Title: 6/10
Lupita- the beginning is a good title but it's not the most creative.

Cover: 6/10
The cover is nice but i don't think the white border fits it well and just looks weird

Blurb: 12/15
The blurb let's you know some of the backstory and makes you want to read the story

Plot and concept: 16/20
I like the concept about how they go through tough times and everything ( i don't want to give spoilers) but anyway i like the plot and concept

Content and chapters: 13/15
The chapter length is medium maybe you could make them longer. The paragraphs in my opinion are the perfect length

Writing skills: 7/10
Your writing is amazing but sometimes when the characters talk you add way too many question marks and your spelling is really good and your punctuation can be improved but it's good.

Overall and extra comments: 60/80
Well done you did a good job for the story.