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I. Title: Luna's Demise
The title itself is very clever and especially for the concept of the fanfiction being a "teen wolf fanfiction," I really liked your title. Now, I will say, personally I was never fond of names in titles (just a personally preference, not telling you to change it). But here, I actually quite like it. It could be since the name itself is very pleasant... but who knows hahaha. The title gives off themes of someone either being an underdog, witnessing something happened and firing back, or what Luna has for the audience to listen in and learn. I am guessing this from the mature rating but that could be from other fields.
II. Cover
I will keep this short and sweet. The cover, like the title, play a HUGE role in getting those audience members to stick around or to find your work. This is also why I never liked names in titles since it can be hard to find but I digress. I am not really in the fanfiction world so I will not be the "absolute experienced" on it. You captivated the red and darker tones and even gain the face claim shading of the red which I adore! It really does speak to the concept you are going for! I know I am repeating myself but yeah.
