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Reviewer - Raven Client user - Baqkns The title of the book - Throne of Dragonix
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Title and Cover
The title has a magical interest and sounds interesting, whereas, for the cover, it's more on a basic side, although I do have to say the cover second to last in the aesthetic was good, and It had a magical aura that could attract the right kind of attention!
Blurb | Description
The summary is equally eye-catching I loved the line "here the emperor of the throne is chosen on the merit, it is not an inheritance of one's descendants"
As the lines were equally and beautifully placed, the line that catches my attention the most was the last "in the end it's just another war" this line build a spark inside me, a spark of interest
Plot development
As the story is still ongoing and only has around 7 parts, so certainly I can't catch any plot developments, however, the storyline is pretty praiseworthy, the story over a throne felt pretty smooth and implemented perfectly, I do have to say the story has potential.
Character
The characters are well placed and don't sound unnecessary or overdone, I like how you introduce a character, which is by letting the reader read on with the story to understand what's happening, so it doesn't get boring, however, I do have to say, using their name in almost every sentence, does make it boring, it is always understandable by a reader if you use their pronounce, or other words to describe.
I would also propose to give Lian some solid reaction, the character's emotion looks rather rushed and looked over
Grammar
There are no major mistakes in grammar, although I would recommend, to go and read the book again, and add punctuations, where required.
Writing style
I liked how you start things, explaining everything beautifully but also in an interesting way, which as a reader I truly admired. The way you create a magical aura with how to place your words are incredible.
Overall
The book has a really good potential and can do good in the future, I courage you to keep writing,
Lastly, Good luck with your work, and I hope the review would help you to enhance your work even more.
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