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❄️ THE REBIRTH MOON | PHOEBE ❄️

 Reviewed by: Illusions_14

Book Title: The rebirth moon 

Author's name: Rachel Henriette

Cover 10/10: I totally love your cover. The setting and colour blue used in the cover matches with both the tittle of the book and it's plot. And the little phrase by the side was like the perfect icing on the cake. It was kind of the first thing to trigger my interest in the book.

Title 9/10: The title is totally in line with your plot and cover. It has this 'ring' to it that catches the eye immediately. Coupled with your cover it's awesome. Since the book is still ongoing I'm not really sure but it feels like your title is only covering the beginning of the book. Anyway as the story progresses we'll find out.

Blurb/Description 10/10: Your blurb equally fuelled my desire to read further into your book. It's like it summarised the basics of the novel without actually spoiling it's contents to your readers.

Creativity and Originality 8/10: While you were creative with the character and characterisation, the settings and etc (Drark , warriors of asengard etc), I still believe your book still goes along the same part that other novels go in the beginning i.e the main character is one of the few people against the tradition of being turned and stuff like that. I don't think there's anything special about that. Just saying.

Plot and Flow 18/20: Your plot is good. The story is going at a gradual pace and it's still keeping the interest of the readers as it progresses. However there's still a bit of your sequence of events that's a bit confusing. Especially after the turning. It's like everything suddenly sped up especially in her relationship with the person who turned her. I'll explain further in character development.

Character Development 8/10: Even though your characters are okay, the feelings or thoughts of your main character and the preson who turned her are confusing. One minute she hated him and one minute she doesn't? It's kind of hard to keep track of that. And it all started after the turning. I don't even get if he feels the same amount of hatred to her kind. Also it feels like the pack doesn't really like her which is a bit confusing. Maybe as the story progresses I'll understand but as of now that part is a real bummer and a huge confusion for us your readers.

Writing style, grammar, spelling etc 9/10: Your writing style is okay as it allows the reader to see both perspectives of the main characters in your novel. However there are a few grammatical errors which most of them are in form of punctuation marks such as (') this. Your spelling is okay too.

Genre relevance 10/10: Your plot so far is in line with the fantasy and paranormal genre.

Reader enjoyment and communication with readers 10/10: I really loved the book and I believe others did as well. The secrets, mystery and suspense is amazing. And you also

addressed a few questions of ours based on your characters in the comment section which most writers don't really have time for. Thumbs up.

Overall 92/100: There are few mistakes here and there but it still doesn't change the fact that your book is wonderful. I was initially supposed to read 5 chapters but how you described her hatred to the vargins alone forced me to read all 16. You manage to communicate to us your readers about your characters thoughts and feelings and I love that.

Tips: Don't stop doing what you love. There'll be critics and haters for sure but there'll also be those that'll love your work for sure. And trust me if you keep on improving on your writing your fans will be far much greater than your haters.