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❄ BUY LOVE | RAVEN ❄

Reviewed by: Raven
Book Title: Buy love
Author's Name: wvoyage

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Cover:6 /10

The cover is moderate when as a reader I looked at it, I thought it was for fantasy. And the blur borders make it look unofficial

And as a reader, I might not click it at first. Changing the cover would help a lot

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Title: 7/10

The title seems interesting because love is a thing you can really buy, so I am curious to find out what it really means.

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Blurb/Description: 8/10

The blurb brings curiosity to the reader's mind but it also seems incomplete and rather broken. The Shiza part seems like a completely different story which can create confusion. Also Amilia's story and Shiza's one seems totally different and not correlated, but I'll be eagerly waiting for what happens

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Plot and Flow: 18/20

So far I really like the flow of the story and also have a curiosity as to what happened in the past. The way you started the book was really intriguing. As for the plot, I can't decide yet since the book only has 7 to 8 chapters. The way you described things was fascinating as well as interesting.

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Writing style, Grammar, spellings, etc.:10 /10

I loved your writing style and how you typed every sentence like it was meant to be. I did not find any grammatical errors which made it really easy to read the book.

The words made it feel like we were in the book, living every scene. So you definitely did a great job in it

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Overall: 76/100

The book was elegant and formal in the format of writing and has a crisp start to it, while the book is original and creative it also really sets curiosity to one's mind.

Although the only problem I faced was the cooperation with Shiza's and Amilia's story, which I am sure you have something in mind, but as if now it makes it kind of forced and confusing for the readers, a major reason is the rapid change of povs.

So I would appreciate it if you work on it.

Also, the cover seems more on a fantasy side.

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Lastly, I would like to add please don't get discouraged by any of my or other's words. I can definitely see potential in the books as well as you as a writer. And I am really Looking forward to reading the next chapters,

Also don't keep the readers waiting for the chapters for too long, since it might distance them from the store

Good luck

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