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❄ AUTUMN FINCH | PHOEBE ❄

Reviewed by: Illusions_14

Book Title: Autumn Finch

Author's name: Snowheart19__3

Cover 8/10: The cover is okay, quite alright. I mean it correlates with the genre of the book but I think it's the same cliche romance book cover where the main characters are kissing or staring each other in the eye, blah blah blah. There's nothing special or unique about that.

Title 6/10: Your Title is okay too. It's not too short, neither is it too long, just perfect. However, isn't it named after the main female character? To me, that's making the book one sided in a sense because from the blurb and the little I've read, the book is talking about the journey of her love with Leonardo. If we even look at it from the description (since the book is only 7 chapters), Leo is more of the main character than Autumn. Therefore, the title should be on something based on both of them or hinting at their love story and not solely on Autumn.

Blurb/description 9/10: The blurb is very good actually. It tells the basics of the book without spoiling it just like every good book should. However, the extract in the first paragraph is very confusing. Is the sentence written in italics and bold supposed to be a statement from someone else? And you never really finished it. You said or rather wrote 'That couldn't be right. I' and moved on to the next chapter. Please find a way to somehow end the extract whilst still making it intriguing. I would've given some suggestions but I don't really know what it is you intended to write there since you haven't reached that part in your novel.

Creativity and Originality 9/10: So far you've been really original, as original as one can be when writing a romance/teen fic genre. However, your book is still starting and I can't really tell where it's headed or not but so far it's creative enough.

Plot and Flow 17/20: It's a total ten out of ten for the plot. I love the sequence of events I can make out so far from the book and majorly the blurb. Since it's just starting, I'm stating this completely on an assumption though after reading the little I've read. However, I feel like your plot is a bit rushed. Like how they meet and the rest, just saying though.

Character Development 10/10: Your characters are okay and I particularly love how you brought up the issue or character, Ryan, her ex. It might be cliche but it just spiced up the entire plot for me.

Writing style, grammar, spellings etc 9/10: Apart from a few grammatical errors with spellings and occasional misplacement of punctuation marks, it's actually okay. I also like your writing style, especially how you always point out what time a particular event is happening. Most writers don't do that nowadays but I like it.

Genre relevance 9/10: Pertaining to it being a teen fiction/ romance book, yeah it correlates with the said genre. However, I've not yet seen how it is a billionaire book, probably because it's still starting, I don't know.

Reader enjoyment and communication with readers 10/10: I really enjoyed the book, your writing style made it so easy for we readers to understand and flow with the story. Looking forward to more.

Overall 87/100: Your book's plot is amazing. The only problem is that it's hard to completely state anything as definite because it's still starting. I still loved it though.

Tips : Simply keep writing, no matter what. You're an amazing writer by the way.