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《Genius》Daughter of the gods

Reviewer: Genius_MinSwag
Book: Daughter of the gods
Author : ProdigiousFlames

COVER

The cover looked so beautiful and historic. It definitely made me a little curious about the story. Just a suggestion, I think you can add the shadows of the historical pandyas in the background

TITLE

I don't really get the reason behind the title of the story. I simply don't get the reason behind this. Besides, it's a really common name and you can find a lot of books with that title. I suggest changing it into something that will match the plot and theme. Examples:

Timeless Love

That Devi from the Kalyug

Dropped from the future

BLURB

The blurb was attractive and nicely written. The quotes and the small description was almost perfect. Overall, it is nice.

WRITING STYLE

YOUR writing style is good but it still can be improved. You are pretty descriptive and that's a good point. But, you can add a lot of synonyms to make plain writing more beautiful and aesthetic. I recommend using the 'Thesasaurus', it will help you.

GRAMMER

The grammatical errors were not a lot and were nicely constructed with proper punctuations and tenses. Great grammer is one of the most important part of any book and it was simply amazing.

PLOT

The plot was nicely written and in order. I'm not a fan of the historical genre but I'm impressed with how you managed to make me hook up on this book. Every chapter made me curious and stole my attention.

CHARACTERS

I personally liked how you portrayed the female protagonist as a strong and independent one, something I have seen in only a few books. The male protagonists made me crack up from time to time and I loved it.

SIDE NOTE

You can write the meaning of the Hindi/Sanskrit words so that non-Indian readers can understand them.