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《Ana》 Brooklyn

Reviewer :- ceo_kjinnie

Brooklyn by Mitali2203

A little heads up before I start the review. There are only two chapters updated as of now in your book therefore this review won't be a detailed one. I’ll review based on what I’ve read so far.

➼COVER (7/10)

The image used for the cover was good however, the font was not pleasing. The title and the author's name were displayed properly on the cover but a (tiny) bit of the font was not in the frame. What I mean to say is that the fonts were not perfectly aligned.

➼TITLE (8/10)

The title is the main character's name, which is not bad. I would have preffered if you had gone for a title that was much more meaningful to the story. Brooklyn is a very common name and there are plenty other stories (on Wattpad) with the same title, which is why your book will not stand out.

➼BLURB (10/10)

The blurb was of the perfect length and has the perfect hook to it that’ll make readers intrigued to know what happens next.

➼PLOT (9/10)

I really liked the central idea of the book and I think it is really interesting. As I mentioned before the story only has two chapters updated so far so I can’t say much about the plot and plot twists.

➼ORIGINALITY (10/10)

A very original story by the author. Originality is always appreciated, keep it up!

➼ WRITING STYLE (6/10)

Your writing style is simple and easy to understand. Readers are able to easily grasp information which is good. The vocabulary is amazing. Based on the two chapters I think the pace of the story is a bit low. The second chapter felt too bland and empty to me.

➼CHARACTER AND STORY DEVELOPMENT (8/10)

I cannot go in depth for this section of the review as when because of the limited number of chapters. For a proper review there needs to be at least 6-10 chapters (at least for me). The character that hooked me the most was Joe Kingston. I think he has an interesting personality and is a softie with a tough facade. It’ll be interesting to see how things unfold and to see why Joe and Brooklyn are the way they are.

➼SETTING/WORLDBUILDING (10/10)

As far as I have read you have explained the setting and surroundings very well, especially in chapter 1.

➼GRAMMAR & SPELLING (8/10)

Grammar and spelling errors are evident in your book. There are also some spelling errors in your blurb. Make the corrections as soon as possible. I’m sure you already know this but I recommend using Hemmingway Editor/Grammarly while proofreading to make it simpler. You can also fill out a form for an editing shop if you’re too lazy (like me).

➼ENJOYMENT AND ENGAGEMENT (9/10)

I think this is a great book for readers who enjoy romance. It’s a great start for a first original story. Keep updating!

➼OVERALL (85/100)

Thank you for choosing me as your reviewer, it was so much fun doing this review! Have a great day/night, Mitali.
                        ~Ana