Rosete | REVIEW SHOP [CLOSED]

《June》 Count 1,2 and 3

Reviewer:: june_berrin

Count 1,2 and 3 By kek_lee_writes

Thank you so much for giving me the chance to review your story.

It was a great story and I enjoyed it.

❥ Title: A unique title and I loved the way you formed it in the blurb. Matched well with the story. But It is not that attention-grabbing either. Overall good job.

❥ Cover: The first cover was not good but the cover you are currently using is better. But it is not that appealing at the same time and may fail to attract readers to it.

❥ Blurb: The blurb is well written. Amazing word choice and no grammatical errors spotter. Well done!

❥ Storyline: It is a very beautiful storyline mixing many different people. But there are some areas where you need to improve a bit but overall it was fun to read. And I also suggest that you do not use too many fancy and difficult words, because at the beginning I did find it difficult to read and understand which did bore me too. So what I am saying here is that you can use fancy words but sometimes the simple ones are also good to use.

❥ Characters: You have given all characters unique perspectives and personalities. Have given them flaws making them more real and is successful, in capturing their feelings very well.

❥ Grammar and punctuations: You have an amazing writing style and great word choices I may say but all words did not flow well together overall, at a point it made even sound a bit weird to me since I am not used to reading such difficult ones. So make it simpler to understand because as an author you will understand everything but you should remember that the readers do not know the whole story so you should try to write it that way.

So now the main point, your grammar was great and on point, I have not spotted any grammatical errors. There were very few punctuation problems that could be easily fixed with some proofreading. And no typo was found.

❥ Conclusions: The book is great and is truly fun to read, and if your target audience is adults or young adults then it is perfect for them. I enjoyed reading even though I had to constantly google some words. And most importantly I any of my words gave hurt you in any way or have come out about harsh then I apologise, I didn't mean to do it. I just give you my honest view of your book. Hope you have a great day.

Best Wishes