Rosete | REVIEW SHOP [CLOSED]

《Li》Vessel of the Lost Soul

Reviewer:_bluexgrey_

Reviewing on: stupidyulie

Book: Vessel of the Lost Soul

Cover- 5/5
-    Great cover, it looks magical and it's very nice!

Title- 5/5
-    Title is great! Unique and it gives you a small glimpse of what the story will be about.

Blurb- 10/10
-    Also great blurb! It is neat and can easily catch the readers attention, I like how you added some questions at the end to get the readers attention on how the story will flow and on how Gayle's life will turn out.

Plot- 10/10
-    Great plot, I love your creativity and how the plot is very interesting. It gives me Percy Jackson vibes, I must say :D

Grammar and Punctualizations- 10/10
-    Very well written,

Character- 10/10
-    I like how you managed to create different creatures and their names etc. The idea for the orb being the prince is great and it's very nice

Storyline- 10/10
-    The flow of the story is great, :D

Enjoyment- 5/5
-    Very much enjoyed it! 

Originality- 9/10
-     It is very original but I gave it a 9 because It's like you combined the little prince and percy Jackson which is great I must say but it also gives a hint of other fantasy movies.

Details: 5/5
-    Well detailed, doesn't lack detail and it is very imaginary when you read it. :D

Engagement: 10/10
-    It is engaging and for me the story just fits in my preference so I loved it, very well written.

Writing style: 10/10
-    The paragraphs aren't too overwhelming and it's just the right length for the whole story. POV's are great, I liked how you wrote Gayle's POV and the prince's. It looks effortless (a good thing) and very well written.

Overall: 99/100

Notes:
Great job on your story! I'll add it to my recommended book in my reading lists! Keep up the good work! I'll continue reading it too <3